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Well it's been a long time coming but I finally finished writing the frst chapter of my graphic novel. The title of the Novel is Raelyn's Quest and this first chapter is entitled The Bar Keeps Daughter.
I was finally able to start the renders and layout of the novel and this is the first page, I will put up the second page later tonight and wil keep adding pages little by little.. want to keep you in some suspense...lol
The novel is based around my OC Raelyn and her quests...lol Raelyn is 18 years old and a Rogue with lots of very unique skills...
I have lots of really cool things planned for Raelyn as well as lots of other orignal characters and quie a few twists and turns... so just when you think you know where i am heading with something... hahaha you are probably wrong...
I hope you enjoy this series as much as I have doing it and stay tuned for lots lots more...
Not sure if I got the right resolution for these pages so I enabled the download, let me know what you think.
I am also still playing with lighting and everything like that so please bear with me, I want all of these renders to look perfect but don't want them taking forever to finish...lol
Any suggestions would be greatly aprciated unless you are going to flame me.. LOL
Thanks for looking
Gary
I was finally able to start the renders and layout of the novel and this is the first page, I will put up the second page later tonight and wil keep adding pages little by little.. want to keep you in some suspense...lol
The novel is based around my OC Raelyn and her quests...lol Raelyn is 18 years old and a Rogue with lots of very unique skills...
I have lots of really cool things planned for Raelyn as well as lots of other orignal characters and quie a few twists and turns... so just when you think you know where i am heading with something... hahaha you are probably wrong...
I hope you enjoy this series as much as I have doing it and stay tuned for lots lots more...
Not sure if I got the right resolution for these pages so I enabled the download, let me know what you think.
I am also still playing with lighting and everything like that so please bear with me, I want all of these renders to look perfect but don't want them taking forever to finish...lol
Any suggestions would be greatly aprciated unless you are going to flame me.. LOL
Thanks for looking
Gary
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Tip for tightening up some dialogue: instead of
“Yes, I came down this morning only to find that Alana was not here. She is always here before me and I am afraid something is terribly wrong.”
how about just
“I came down this morning and Alana wasn’t here. It’s not like her to disappear like this.”
And just get rid of the text “Alana is a very special girl and I am scared that something has happened to her.” And possibly also “Why would anyone want to take Alana?”. I know you’re trying to hint at something, but why bother? The fact that her disappearance is part of this story means we can already assume it’s important.
Sometimes less verbiage is more.
“Yes, I came down this morning only to find that Alana was not here. She is always here before me and I am afraid something is terribly wrong.”
how about just
“I came down this morning and Alana wasn’t here. It’s not like her to disappear like this.”
And just get rid of the text “Alana is a very special girl and I am scared that something has happened to her.” And possibly also “Why would anyone want to take Alana?”. I know you’re trying to hint at something, but why bother? The fact that her disappearance is part of this story means we can already assume it’s important.
Sometimes less verbiage is more.